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小編今日要來共享較為艱難但很好用的內(nèi)容，也就是大部分人在英文寫作上經(jīng)常產(chǎn)生的錯誤，嘗試訓練閱讀文章錯誤創(chuàng)作案例，思索更順暢合理的書寫并把握住創(chuàng)作的關(guān)鍵。就可以另外防止小錯誤，又可以讓你的英文寫作合理發(fā)展喔!提議大伙兒看了初始版本號之后，先回過頭來有哪些難題，如果是你會如何調(diào)整，再去看看調(diào)整版本號，那樣能夠保證自身有在思索，也較為可以協(xié)助你的英語發(fā)展喔! 六個普遍的創(chuàng)作錯誤!你準備好了嗎?要花一點時間閱讀文章喔! 一、片段的句式(Sentence Fragments)： 要保證自身所應(yīng)用的分號能連接起來2個語法恰當、含意表述詳細的句式，還要當心英語口語上盡管是幾句話，但實際上是要用分號相互連接的狀況。 初始版本號： Tests of the Shroud of Turin have produced some curious findings.For example,the pollen of forty-eight plants native to Europe and the Middle East. 調(diào)整版本號： Tests of the Shroud of Turin have produced some curious findings.For example,the cloth contains the pollen of forty-eight plants native to Europe and the Middle East. 初始版本號： Scientists report no human deaths due to excessive caffeine consumption.Although caffeine does cause convulsions and death in certain animals. 調(diào)整版本號： Scientists report no human deaths due to excessive caffeine consumption,although caffeine does cause convulsions and death in certain animals. 二、繞口的句式(Sentence Sprawl)： 有時大家經(jīng)常由于漢語的「由于...因此...」就立即把Because...so...這相似個「級別」的連詞，用在同一個語句中，或是是相互連接了太長的語句，這都是會讓英文閱讀者感覺很疲倦。 初始版本號： The hearing was planned for Monday,December 2,but not all of the witnesses could be available,so it was rescheduled for the following Friday.[這句話自身語法沒有錯誤，可是閱讀文章起來卻十分的繞口不如意] 調(diào)整版本號： The hearing,which had been planned for Monday,December 2,was rescheduled for the following so that all witnesses would be able to attend. 三、錯置的或是不是適當?shù)难b飾(Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers)： 要記住你用的修飾句要考入你所需敘述的主關(guān)鍵詞，還要保證你的修飾句在講的哪個總體目標有出現(xiàn)在文章內(nèi)容或語句中喔! 初始版本號： When writing a proposal,an original task is set for research(這proposal是誰寫的?) 調(diào)整版本號： When writing a proposal,a scholar sets an original task for research. 四、構(gòu)造不平行面(Faulty Parallelism)： 1.創(chuàng)作的情況下要留意前后左右的語句所應(yīng)用的語態(tài)、句式都如果一致的2.如果你要舉例說明的情況下，舉的事例如果在一樣的構(gòu)造下能不容易令人感覺怪異，比如早飯有豆槳、炸油條、雞蛋餅;跟早飯有豆槳、雞蛋餅、美式早餐(美式早餐是早飯的種類、可是豆槳跟炸油條是早飯的新項目) 初始版本號： The candidate?s goals include winning the election,a health program,and education. 調(diào)整版本號： The candidate?s goals include winning the election,enacting a national health program,and improving the educational system.(由于后邊盡管是接三個專有名詞，可是她們前邊的形容詞也不同樣，因此要還記得把形容詞放進這一平行結(jié)構(gòu)中) 初始版本號： Some critics are not so much opposed to capital punishment as postponing it for so long. 調(diào)整版本號： Some critics are not so much opposed to sentencing convicts to capital punishment as they are to postponing executions for so long. 五、代稱不清楚(Unclear Pronoun Reference)： 應(yīng)用代稱能夠讓閱讀文章的人更為輕輕松松通俗易懂，可是假如應(yīng)用錯誤或者不足清晰，便會令人感覺很疑慮。 初始版本號： Einstein was a brilliant mathematician.This is how he was able to explain the workings of the universe. 調(diào)整版本號： Einstein,who was a brilliant mathematician,used his quantitative ability to explain the workings of universe.(原來的This并不了解他指的是什么) 初始版本號： Because Senator Martin is less interested in the environment than in economic development,she sometimes neglects it. 調(diào)整版本號： Because of her interest in economic development,Senator Martin sometimes neglects the environment.(本來的it非常容易令人搞不懂是environments還是economic development) 六、代稱的單復(fù)數(shù)與專有名詞要一致(Pronoun Agreement)： 它是非常容易忽視的小地區(qū)，代稱的功效是能夠讓專有名詞能夠無需一直反復(fù)出現(xiàn)，但是假如單復(fù)數(shù)沒有應(yīng)用恰當?shù)迷?，非常容易會令人疑慮。 初始版本號： When a candidate runs for office,they must expect to have their personal life scrutinized. 調(diào)整版本號： When candidates run for office,they must expect to have their personal lives scrutinized. 初始版本號： According to tenets of the“new urbanism,”everyone needs to consider the relationship of their house to the surrounding community. 調(diào)整版本號： According to tenets of the“new urbanism,”everyone needs to consider the relationship of his or her house to the surrounding community.(前邊的everyone后邊并不是接their喔!) |
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